Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside.
Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted.
解析:on—with句意:随着工业化的发展。短语搭配错误。短语with the development of随着……的发展。
Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has alre ady become a ve ry seriously problem.
解析:been去掉 句意 :许多研究表明。语态用法错误。主语与动词为主动关系,这里不需要用被动语态。
解析:seriously—serious句意:全球变暖已经成为严重的问题。词性用法错误。修饰名词,前面用形容词修饰。
The airs we br eathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways to protect our environment.
解析:airs—air 句意:我们呼吸的空气变得越来越脏。名词用法错误。名词air英语词汇立体记忆为不可数名 词。
解析:much—many句意:许多罕见的动物已经消失。名词animal为可数名词,故用many修饰。